It's fine. The self insert is a weird choice. Because of how it's set up, it feels very lowstakes, even when drama happens. I suppose I respect making a game about how you're fucking a ranger who only kinda knows what he's doing despite looking cool. Everyone working at this park is kinda incompetent, which would be charming if it didn't get someone lost.
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