A deliberately paced slice of life with some interesting characters! There's quite a lot happening in this one, so it feels somewhat like a (longer) novel. For some reason, it reminds me of when I read the Twilight series way back. (Which is a good thing imo! I actually liked that series lol.) The characters are all very likeable and I got more invested as I read. I do have to say some of the narration felt a bit too much tell and not enough show. And some plot points felt a bit forced (i.e. When they first meet in the forest and they say something like "Let's get to know each other!") I get the intention behind all these instances, but I guess maybe it could've been more subtle/natural? Overall, it was a great read with great art (the unfinished bits did NOT affect my enjoyment).
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