Finished up to the current ending.  Excellent VN, both in h-content, writing, character, and choices.  I don't think I've ever seen as complex a branching influence system as that in a VN.  Don't really consider myself a BDSM guy, so I was reluctant to try a game with this premise.  Still, it was great.  Fun, fascinating, solid writing and character development, and tons of hot scenes.  And, with all the branches / choices, it has excellent replay value - a rare thing in VNs.  Please keep going and finish this thing.  I'd be more than happy to buy the full, finished product someday, and I'd do it for a full 60 dollar price tag at that.  I'd love to see where all the possible routes go, and I really hope certain characters get some just desserts in some of those endings.

If I critiqued anything at all, and this is very minor -- I was blown away by this VN in many ways -- there's the auto setting's speed.  Max speed is really slow.  I set it to auto during certain scenes to...have both hands free, let's say, and it was still agonizingly slow.  I'm an avid reader (books and games) and...if there's any possible way to speed auto up beyond it's current max, please do.