The presentation is off the charts on this one, it's so utterly charming from the very start. I would love to read more, but I would struggle without an editing pass- it was quite a slow opening, at least on Parker's route which we tried, with a lot of time spent waiting around and Parker even commenting that he has nothing to do (which is a shame, because moments like meeting the lil' excitable guy with the sandwich in the cafeteria was adorable hah!). Cutting some of the chaff could make a more concise, compelling experience. Also, the ability to turn off the 'clack' as each message appears, without turning off all over sound effects, would be welcome!