I think this VN's presentation is solid, though I think the music changes can feel abrupt and with the way the story moves about means that some music tracks  don't quite get the chance to "show off," as a manner of speaking.

I think the MC and his quest to get laid is so unrelatable that it disengages me from the story. I don't know if I can truly call going to a furry con with the end goal of scoring a night with another gentleman a justifiable cause. I find myself agreeing with Osgood (at least when it comes to Swift doing a bit too much to try and get laid), but it just feels wrong that the story as it's written makes me think that.