I think it's hard to judge this piece on its own, because it's a fragment of a greater whole. But what's there makes me interested in what comes next. Plus, I always appreciate a trans character done well. I do wish there was a little more build up or explanation on jenn being crazy beyond "she's straight and she's a bitch" but eh what can you do. Boris and Trent toxic yaoi let's gooooo

very strong aesthetically, and I appreciate the poetry parts