NeveN's pretty cool. It's the kind of thing that's engaging enough to read over extended periods of time without needing a break. I like Erik as an energetic main character and how he always finds a way to make conversations with other fun.
If there's anything I believe NeveN is lacking, it's the visuals. While I like the style as it is, the sprites are not as expressive as what other VNs these days have to offer, and it's lacking that artistic touch that makes scenes wow you in other VNs.
That being said, the writing is where it's at for me, and I'm definitely deep into it enough that I'll follow the story until the end.
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