It's quite sweet and cute, I just wanted a little more I think. Cedar, Flare, and Cream are all charming characters on the surface, and their interactions with each other are interesting and believable. The romance feels well earned, for the most part, and I like the character designs. I do think it's a shame that the route splits so early on, because Cedar being a bit meek means that most of the interesting banter happens when all three are there. I also think Cedar wanting his two friends more than anything could've been developed a bit more? I mean it's great that he ends up making out with, and then fucking, whoever his respective choice is, but Cedar isn't even in his car by the time he gets out there. It just feels like a purposefully missed opportunity to have all three of them together, and the statement that that opportunity has long since passed doesn't really feel true. I would also like a little more context to them. How did Cream get started on graffiti, and how does it fulfill him? What is Flare in college for, if it's not cooking? There's traits that provide character, but with nothing tying them to each other. I do really like how hungry Cedar becomes for whoever he picks. Hell yeah, world ending or not, get it buddy. 

Lookin forward to what you do next!