Pretty good start of a story, though the Ai art is annoying,
pro's
good hand drawn art
the overall vibe is chill
the ui is great
the music is spot on
you can skip the mini game
few to no grammar issues
havent seen any plot holes yet.
Average's
the characters are just ok with no real standouts
con's
ai art each picture that should be the same character doesn't look like the same character
story is far too railroaded for this style of visual novel
only 1/3 mini games(cafe) is worth a damn
you are given a single choice to select often, like instead of that just make it another text box.
in scenes where the character shouldn't(during second bottle spin game) have clothes on the clothing pops in and out of existence
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