The overall setting is interesting, characters too. The writing in the first two chapters is not bad, third chapter is is good with some hints at great, there were some really emotional moments.

The most disappointing thing was low resolution renders with no anti-aliasing whatsoever. It looks really bad, especially on 65'' 8k display. The third chapter is significantly better, but there were plenty of AI-like rendering artifacts. I'm not against developer using any tools necessary, but more attention to details would be nice. Similarly, the renders used on welcome screen should be updated, such a low quality makes for less than stellar first impression.

I like how much the developer focused on the story itself, with only occasional tasteful lewd content here and there. The humor is good too, made me laugh a few times.

The soundtrack could be better, but I wasn't too disappointed about it.

Overall I really like the story and looking forward to future updates. The writing gets better with each chapter, so I have high hopes for future updates. Thank you!