The pacing of this story has serious problems. It begins with a grand setup, a world dying and rescued by good. Then everyone appears on stage right away, raising expectation sky-high. But what follows is nothing more than standstill dialogue. Most of the character's charm are simply explained through talks, just like the protagonist's backstory, which seems he has helped many people, but lacks of any real achievements on display. This kind of arrangement feels anti-climatic, and with voice-acting? The pacing is even slower, turning the voice acting into a drawback instead of strength.
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