Edit: I think my initial rating was too hasty. On further consideration, changing this to a 4/5.

Original:

For a Ren'Py game, there is a lot in this one and it's very well done, in terms of UI and all that. So why the 3/5 rating? Two main reasons.

1) Intro is immense. Takes way too much time, especially for an adult game where we mainly just want to get to the naughty bits. - Obviously, the 'pro' side of the coin here is that there's a lot of lore and world building. To me, though, it felt like it really dragged after a while, especially once the 'dev' (Nya) started popping in and out of the narrative. I would love to see that character completely removed and replaced by a 'favorite' witch or something along those lines.

2) Gameplay is pretty broken in certain areas, like leveling up perception. The on screen hint is almost necessary for certain parts of the chapters after the intro because of how odd some of the wording is as to what needs to happen next.

All in all, this is a very solid contender in the adult Ren`Py field. However, it needs just a bit more polish to get it up to that 4 star area and then, after the game has continued to expand, I could see it easily hitting 5 stars.

Right now, I think it's biggest weakness is trying to do too much all at once. Simplifying the whole intro part, cutting out large swaths of boring content, and streamlining the entire game will really polish this up.