The art is lovely, cute and sexy, but the writting is all over the place. Too much tragedy, too much tension, too much drama. Uses memes and pop culture references as it's main humor source. There's no pay-offs in the story, not just from a erotic perspective; all plots end up in subversion. The tension is constant, like the author is afraid the reader will lose interest if there's not constantly some threat breathing on the back of your neck, it becomes exhausting. The worldbuilding is inconsistent, taking elements from Games whorkshop's warhammer fantasy, that feel utterly out of place, and spanish pop culture that's only relevant for spaniards. The only things this visual novel has going for it is the pixel art, which is really good and the level design, which is also nicely done. Still,you gotta sit through the writting to witness those, so, up to you if it's worth it.
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