Oh, this is quite stream of consciousness, but I like it a lot. I think if you leaned a little more into the storybook aesthetic it could really shine! I quite like the art and the music choices are good and sweet as well. It ends right when it feels like it really finds itself, and the comparison between an online community and the community of ancestral deer is very heartwarming. It's simple, and more than a little rough around some of the edges in the prose, but I think it's so earnest and genuine that it makes up for that. Good work!