Maybe I'm not artsy enough to appreciate this. But it read to me like a networking coffee chat turned VN tutorial, then back again. The jump(s) back to the decision point got me quite confused, because when I selected the same option, the story changed while some of it stayed the same? I did find the camera work to be quite interesting but did not understand how it contributed to the delivery of the story. It was like a mini documentary, but one I ultimately couldn't relate to.
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