Congrats to Azunite for his first complete VN! š¦ I believe this is your most indulgent story yet. š
Bearing in mind that this is a mostly single-person project with a very short time frame, I think you did a good job. I imagine in the distant future you may come back and add some additional polish, but you have a solid foundation to build off of.
Implementing a menu system with diverging paths is rather intimidating to do with such a time limit as well.
I'm still looking forward to the future updates of your other stories.
(Full disclosure, I did rather quickly draw some of the cutscenes for this vn during the last week of the jam š.)
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