The introductory section needs improvement, as the interaction and the rapid increase in friendship between the two characters felt rushed.
Regarding the music. I think it would be great to add more tracks, since relying on only one or two feels a bit anticlimactic in certain situations.
I look forward to future updates if there's plan to expand the VN further 😄
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