Fairly good. Notable discrepancies with AI generated images. One image even had a boob on an arm. Styles between actors was mostly consistent but it could be better. Audio was appropriate. It would be even better with more continuous tracks or scene specific tracks. The visual novel format is a good presentation. It also lends to there being another narrative other then being intimate between the actors though. I would've like to see more of that. The censorship to patreon is abrupt. No viewer likes it, but it's there for a reason. It would appear better if whole chapters would be sold rather then the ending part of this visual novel. I can see there is roughly no distinction in chapters or scenes since there's not much in substance of a story. The transition between days could be one. I understand this is a work in progress though, a broad range of things could be improved. I liked what it's got so far.
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