Solid story. Needs work with audio putting and experiment more with the text, since it needs more to be memorable for it.
So far the art saves it majority of time, but it needs a better way to transition between scenes.
Nonetheless, had a good time and worth a read.
itch.io is an open marketplace for independent game creators. It's completely free to upload your content. Read more about what we're trying to accomplish and the features we provide.