I love the characters in Lycoris Radiata. 

But....

The English is not the best. Example: "it became even worst." Many of these VN writers use 'worst' in this manner, when 'worse' is correct. "It became even worse" is how it should have been written.

Oh great, another writer who doesn't know the difference between breath and breathe. Breath is a noun and breathe is a verb. You take a breath and you breathe oxygen.

You don't neuter a female animal, you spay her. Neutering is reserved for males only.

Mei is not a ginger, she is a brunette.

"The hunter has become the prey" is correct, not "The hunter has become the pray." The praying mantis hunts its prey. 

It's not written "Can't tell I have", it's "I can't say that I have."

It's "one live specimen" or "one specimen alive", not "one alive specimen."

You don't "come out with a plan", you "come up with a plan."