Beautiful art! I really like the stylized pixelated aesthetic. The UI is also intuitive and the implementation of loading saves, and messing with the settings is a nice touch.
I think the next thing to do is add more in terms of decisions and choices to create more of an interactive experience rather than a linear visual novel.
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