Great characterization, great writing, original idea! I love this!! My only complaint is it isn't complete yet lol adding to my collection of WIPs I'm waiting for.

More detailed: The characters all feel very individual and 3D, if that makes sense. The writing is interesting and sometimes darkly funny in a way that made me cackle at times (Oh, Maud. How I already love you!). The world building is detailed enough to flesh it out with out getting boring or bogging down the main story. I'm enjoying the various different types of supernaturals that differ from the cookie-cutter basics like vamps and weres.

On another note, if you ever need an editor/playtester, purely for text reasons (I don't know code), then I'm so in!!  Free of charge!! I noticed a few small errors that I'm sure slipped through the cracks because of how complex this game is. So many stats! 

Otherwise, completely awesome and I can't wait for more!!