I found the original full rough draft somewhere and I fell in love with the story. It's sweet and enough drama to keep things going, I just couldn't get enough of it. I couldn't stop reading. I finished the story in 4 (looooong) evenings and I wanted to reread it. That's when I found it here and I saw.. A REVAMP! I just had to have it and just bought the game. Best. F***ing. Decision. Ever. INHALED the revamp and the added bits, with the upgrade in quality makes it feel like a new story for me. I already knew the story, but I don't know. The slight changes in the text, coupled with the animations and the music really gave it the vibes it deserved. It's fair to say that this is gonna be a hyperfixation of mine for a while. I'm gonna start a reread of the original full draft, because I feel I ended on a cliffhanger with the Revamp. And then again and again and again.
The only tidbit I have is with Braden when he looks annoyed in the original draft, he looks like a dead fish. The resemblance just popped in my head once and I can't unsee it, even in the revamp. It's stuck in my brain, I'm so sorry.
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