Most of the kinks were really nice, loved "Deborah's" route and the teacher's route. Can't wait to see more. IMO an improvement would be that the Gallery include the dialogue that accompanies the images, because the dialogue is 90 % of the attraction. I also think that the cycle might be a bit bugged as almost none of the character interactions advance the time, e.g. fighting the robots. I also think it would be nice to have some variation on who we fight in the city. Great game, Great potential