All-around well done! Great writing, art, sound, music. Pacing is great, balancing the reveals of several different mysteries, the looming dread of the largest mystery, the dramas of the surprisingly complicated and diverse relationships between the many well-rounded members of the cast -- all alongside more lighthearted moments. I also love when the VN experiments with new mechanics, and I look forward to how those (might) play a role in the future!
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