Really interesting worldbuilding so far despite being early in development. 

I like the use of multiple character perspectives and the setup for the branching paths in the future. The characters themselves do a good job of standing out and I'm already itching to know more. 

I actually didn't even realize it wasn't finished when I downloaded it and was fully intending to pull an all-nighter to complete it. 

Excellent work so far, hopefully development goes smoothly for ya!