The Art is nice the story is cute HOWEVER there's just too little game here. I think this is supposed to be an interactive fiction which would perhaps lower my annoyance because I simply do not play them and if I do I know what I'm getting.
This at least has A choice and A branching path as VNs do but it's very bare-bones. A full dialogue tree and choice s part of a VN so this is too little.
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