Overall love the game so far. Only critiques are that the dialog is sometimes awkward, narration text can sometimes be long-winded (but not badly written, just flowery), and the graphics for animated scenes could be better - skin-skin contact looks a little off, and fingers in animated scenes looked clubbed and a bit strange, haha. 

Like the story so far, and the characters and world building. A decent amount of complexity in characterizations (I liked the very valid implication that the old man could have used darker methods for the "greater good"). The way magic is done is interesting and even unique in some respects - more limited so far than I had anticipated, in a good way. 

Looking forward to more of it.