This was... Surprising... I wasn't expecting it actually. I thought at first this was something inspired by I Heard it, Too by Axeman which is a fantastic short horror, that always comes up to my head whenever I think about horror, and well... I guess it was something a lot more deeper haha...

It was a good surprise, don't get me wrong, but... I felt a little disappointed it wasn't what I expected. xd

Now let's focus on the game! It was excellent! I felt really uncomfortable in some scenes, and things turned out really creepy in some parts, but... There's something wrong with the writing that I can't 100% sure say if it's this or that...

Let's just say it needs some work in some parts... Why? Well, the game doesn't feel smooth when you read it, it's like you jump to one part and then go back to what you where talking about. It also doesn't feel like you needed to explain everything that's happening, like in that part where she explains the rain in the ground or something like that... I think it's fine to do that, but in some parts it felt weird/rushed or out of place... Either way, not sure if it's that, but there's something weird in the writing for me.

The art suited perfectly with this unsettling and uncomfortable feeling you felt all the game, and the soundtrack... My god, if this is original you did a f-king great job, honestly it's the best music I've heard on a horror visual novel... Ever!

Honestly quite excited to see what you're going to be doing next, keep up the good work!