I really liked it. You should know that you forgot the space when it says "walkwayShe must be a cop but she doesn't look like the others."

And the phrase "a fearless pretty fearless bunch of freelancers who came after you" is pretty redundant, since i don't think you meant to use 'fearless' twice.

I still liked the story, and the highlighted extra bits added to the world building. There were even parts where i was nervous to make the wrong decision.! <3