I really liked this one!  Beautiful art, good character writing, neat twist.

I think my favorite thing about this, and something I'll try to take inspiration from in my own writing, was the emphasis on the differences in how the two women kissed and touched Sera.  The vivid descriptions of the different feeling, different motivation, and the different responses they each elicit in her are delightful to read and help to develop Sera's character.  The hunger of Yves is such a sharp contrast with the gentleness of Irina and I loved that.

It has an issue with text skipping that made it pretty painful to replay and hunt all routes so I only got the main 3.