I recommend looking for any GUI that you can use (with attribution, there's plenty!) - that will make the game stand out more.
As to writing, it feels.. not fully there yet, I think.
Also I think more visuals (even a simple background) in the opening scene with black screen would help a lot.
Good luck with your project!
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