It starts out fine, with an interesting story. That all changes when ugly women start being called beautiful. Take Angelique for example. Her face looks fake like plastic. She has lifeless blue eyes, an ugly blond hairdo with a square masculine face, grossly oversized lips with her cheek lines going right up to her mouth. When Jensen said "a very good looking woman called Angelique", I literally vomited. Then there is Cynthia, with her exaggerated cheekbones coming to a point then directly bending into her nose, looking like two big Y's on her face (she also has an ugly butt and boobs). Don't even get me started on Maria. She is like the queen of plastic clowns, right down to the painted-on arch eyebrows and bright melon-colored plastic lips. Jane is just the most disgustingly ugly piece of work that I have ever seen. She looks like she made out with a rototiller and went back for thirds then fell out of the ugly tree and hit every branch on the way down. 

There is also another strange occurrence being that Ciri, from 'The Witcher III' is in this VN and is called "Frankie." 

Nickola's goth makeover is uninspired, tacky and gross. She also has a flat butt and no hips. Yuck!

If you are writing American English, it is spelled defense. If writing British English, it is defence. And since this is supposed to be American, you do the math. If not and it is British, then biscuits, labour and honour are the way to go.

Mei-lin's sister, Aikami (god? really? dumb!), looks like a sex doll or an anime character with overly plasticky skin and super phony looking aqua-colored eyes. Mei-Lin is more of a Chinese name than Japanese. Mei by itself can be Japanese, but with Lin added, it becomes Chinese.