pretty good as a proof of concept. Love the Hypnosis webcomic; I cannot wait to see what's next after the baseball arc. Excited to see what's next, though I think it could be good to add a small interaction test. For example, something movable or toggleable in the real world that has a tangible effect on the dream world, such as the position of a bean bag or whether the fireplace is on or out, based on whether you left the TV on.
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