I love this. It's beautifully written. The plot, the pacing, the logic and lead up to the protagonist's decision to leap into the unknown, the characters, and the deeper situation revolving around Max and Ivy-Rose -- It's all truly amazing. I am so excited to read more.
Wonderfully done.
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