Visuals could use some work, but iirc you already worked on resprite on most models, so I'll see when next version is out. Visual expressions was also a problem because of that. Writing is decent, I don't think I have anything in particular to critique other than wide use of military terminology without hints for clueless people (which doesn't apply to spanish dialogues because Byron is not supposed to understand them either, which therefore doesn't create a dissonance between player and MC in the narrative). Music is good, girls are cute. Not sure how the bee hive mystery will play out, hopefully it won't fall down the pit of unreasonable mess just to keep people hooked. I assume mistakes already pointed out are fixed in v3 so I will give 5 stars because this game has a huge potential and the core theme is really interesting. I will probably adjust the review when it's out, but for now here it is. Good luck with the game, keep it up.