Even though the prose and conversation bits ramble on a bit sometimes, it always manage to reel me back in with the developing relationship between Luc and Darius. 

And just as I thought the flashbacks were getting in the way of the romance, the narrative drops me to another world. It's a whiplash that I don't know how to feel about. 

The sci-fi world has a lot of technical intrigue but there isn't enough interesting characters or stakes to keep me caring about what is happening. I find myself skimming through the lore to get back to the relationship with Luc.

Overall wonderful minimalistic and modern UI that added a lot of mood. Absolute insane level of programming went into this. Still don't know how you pull the final few scenes off.

 
A must read for the jam.