That was fantastic! The opening was so stylish that it gave me a chuckle. The UI and the custom Godot build was impressive too, though I was a bit annoyed that the renpy hotkeys I was used to didn't work.

Admittedly I was lost in Part 1. Some strange word choices left the world building a bit ambiguous, but it quickly picked itself back up in Part 2. It posed some questions that I thought was pretty interesting.  Overall I think the way Part 1 progressed didn't do the stories any favor,  though everything became much clearer on a second read.

The protagonist of the story was a bit tough to get through. The choices he made, understandably, hone the themes quite well, but I have to admit that somethings he said almost made me want to stop reading. I'm left wondering if the third person perspective dampened that experienced it or made it worse.

But overall this is a standout entry. Wonderfully stylish and deserves a read by everyone. I ended up going through this creator's other work as well. All excellent and has a intensely unique voice. Can't wait to see what they do next!