All There is powerful at exploring its grim subjects and being a conduit for empathy, successfully conveying situations that are hard to even imagine for those that haven't experienced them. I believe a story like this could have been fumbled very easily by a less experienced writer, but the author managed to avoid such pitfalls. 

Presentation wise, it feels very carefully planned and almost austere: one character in one room is all we get, and all we need. The audio, various additional visuals (like the flashback imagery) work really well to build up the atmosphere of dread. The usual jam chaos induced jank is also absent.

This is a good example of a short story with a strong core that never loses focus, excellent job!