It's a fun and clever idea but I rated it lower cause you made the levels hard too quickly. Dying 10 times on level 3 or 4 is not fun especially when I've barely had time to use the core movement mechanics. You need to give players more easy levels so they can just have fun and get good at the mechanics.
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