I'm enjoying the visuals, aesthetic, and character designs. And I like wandering around.
-Minor point: I didn't like how often I would explore into a complete dead-end, nothing to see or interact with.
-Minor point: I'd like to be able to hop down from small cliffs, since going around felt needlessly annoying.
-Minor point: While wandering, characters will talk, and their text goes away too fast, could you tie that to a button press like you did with the rest of the dialog?
-Major point: The writing does not work for me at all. I want to love these characters, but. The way they talk to each other came across stilted to me. Not casual. By-the-books. Like, there was this one moment where they talked about a fella being #2 worldwide champ and that part of the writing really worked for me. More of that conversation style, if possible?
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