I had a mixed experience with this one, mostly for a degree of amateurishness that coats the so much of the experience.

Inconsistent writing, odd use (and lack) of punctuation marks, a weak mystery and a confusing twist are some of the aspects that I think harmed the project the most.

Another aspect I'm not too keen on are the sprites. I cannot deny they're memorable and well made, but I found the some of its elements—such as the ridiculously exaggerated expressions—to be a real poor fit for the tone of the story.

While not exactly a bad time or a poor first step, I hope this experience will propel the dev to deliver more cohesive works in the future.