Bez, there's just something about your design taste that just tickles me. I'm in a bit of a time crunch so I'm mostly skimming since its a bit longer (sorry). I really love the dichotomy of Fool and Storm for the central character stat. It creates very interesting characters. It's a very effective use of the Lasers and Feeling system.
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