I'm liking the story and it made me curious about whats going to happen next, but the grammar is poor and there are missing parts to the story in terms of choices (Near the end of the story, I chose an option, and it lead into a blank passage, can't say if this is common as I only read through this story once). Also I can't put my finger on why, so sorry for mentioning it, but Levi's dialogue felt poorly written and cringy for the most part.