I've been sleeping on this VN because I didn't really think it would be my speed, but I did enjoy Rhoun's route when I went through it. Good writing and good ideas on display here, and a good take on a slow burn romance.

The one critique I would offer is grammatical. There are many instances where unambiguously male characters like Rhoun are referred to as "they" rather than "he" in a way that seems inconsistent rather than intentional.