Story Telling:

Immersion breaking 3rd person PoVs.

Both in story and animation. Unhealthy to relate and hard to relate 3rd person content. A turn off to me for a sense of sharing, voyeurism of a love interest.

Art:

Love interests has mature / voluptuous feminine bodies.

Detailed textures, surroundings.

4 stars if:

The content was fully 1st person.

5 stars if:

4 star requirements.

Full logical story.

No immersion breaking bugs.