The introduction is very long and very talkative, but has nothing much to say than some mysterious dark men of the underground who does not open so much to women. I hate this when the game makes a lot of reference to people you don't know yet to say, hey this story is big.
I prefer to have a well written short story than a dense long story with a lot of mysteries thrown to your face in the beginning. I had to do some efforts to go to the end of it, in then end you see only one female character that actually is a character that could stay apart from the one in the mind of the main character.
Therefore this game needs a lot of improvement in the writing and the pacing for me.
If you want some mysterious dark story with big boys with a mysterious past go for it, but for me it is not good with this writing.
The graphics are really good however they are not used to represent something
much interesting.
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