As of version 0.24.8

The story is okay I guess. The grammar is okay as well, has a  lot of small grammar issues. Not enough to totally ruin the game but enough for it to be annoying. The scenes are good, animated with some sound. There is a fair bit of clipping for hair or clothes for some of it.

There is no walkthrough. Most choices are pretty simple and don't matter much. 

Overall I rate it 2/5.  I didn't really like the story much, didn't really like any of the girls either... I would say most of my problems with the game is in the story department with the rest being with the grammar.  Without being able to really effect the story with the choices I just didn't like how it was naturally playing out.