3am writing this, sorry but this has to be the most tedious and uncreative plot I've ever witnessed in a FVN I've played.
My friend and I spent hours collecting all cgs and finding the "best" ending.
Talk about the story - Ending when everything unfolds:
The main cast has to go through deaths, live in an island for the rest of their life (in other endings), Leong having a toxic relationship (explain later), etc. To find out in the end, they just apologized for the confusion, and everyone all happy and acted like nothing happen in the end.
The "villain" (Gatsby) here doesn't face any consequences, cuz he literally a god with his unlimited powers (they even go overboard with mind erasing, bye).
Leong's toxic relationship also piled on top of this mess, based on the interaction between him and Gatsby, he literally just a programmed guard robot that do everything Gatsby said because he have been "rewritten" using hypnosis. (In other "good" ending, he unlikely to escape from it too, based on the writing).
"Oh well, maybe I'm here for the x scenes, not the stories. What are you gonna do?" - The scenes are also half done, it only have 1 variant and have some animate to it, writing is okay ig (it's just casual x scenes, so I didn't think much).
Talk about everything else:
Aside from the sad writing, others have done well to me, game mechanics, characters' movements, bgm (I like a few of them), etc. Some minor issues about screen resolution (screen 27-inch) and layout, but it's acceptable.
Did just play the full DnD and lil bit of FF and to compare, the writing in DnD is more makes sense (some parts are acceptable) and the variants in cgs are def better.
Overall, the writing is so bad that the other elements don't make up for it.
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