As of version 1.5

The story is good, simple fallen into cash need money premise. The grammar is good anything awkward is due to what you enter at the start. Scenes are fine.

Inability to adjust volume and a bare bones setting menu is a negative.

Maybe I have been spoiled with the basic renpy games but not having the easy to use available features it provides made navigating the game annoying. 

Overall I rate a 3/5. Didn't get to far into it got annoyed, I guess with age I have a lower tolerance for the unfamiliar. I probably didn't give the game a proper chance.